AP English Language May 13 — Yale M.A. Essay Feedback
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AP English Language Exam is Wednesday — North Shore Students Still Have 4 Days.
Most students stuck at a 3 or 4 are losing points in the same two fixable places and don’t know it.
I’m a Yale M.A. with 10+ years of editorial experience across Johns Hopkins, Yale, and Columbia. I read your essay once, identify the exact sentences costing you rubric points, and tell you precisely how to fix them. That’s it (no Zoom calls needed).
The feedback takes you 24 hours to receive. The judgment behind it took a decade to develop.
Here’s what that looks like:
BEFORE:
“The author uses imagery to create emotion.”
AFTER:
“The repeated religious imagery frames the character’s guilt as unavoidable, strengthening the passage’s tone of moral entrapment.”
That’s the difference between a 3 and a 5 on the AP rubric.
What You Get (within 24 hours):
• The exact sentences where your response loses rubric points
• Your thesis rewritten into a score-maximizing version
• Targeted fixes to your analysis and commentary
• A model sentence showing what a high-scoring response looks like
• A reusable template you can apply to every essay on exam day
Pricing:
• $15 — Single paragraph review
• $50 — Full essay feedback
About Me:
• M.A. English Literature, Yale University
• B.A. Johns Hopkins University
• M.S. Columbia University
• 10+ years of editorial and writing instruction experience
For Parents:
If your student is stuck at a 3 or 4, this is the fastest way to change that before Wednesday. I provide precise, rubric-based edits that improve thesis clarity, evidence integration, and analysis, all of which are the exact criteria AP scorers use. Results are immediate and concrete.
You won’t just fix this essay; your student will walk into Wednesday knowing exactly how to structure every response.
Get Started:
Reply with subject line: AP LANG – [Your Essay Type]
Then include:
1. What you’re submitting
2. Which package you want ($15 paragraph or $50 full essay)
I’ll send payment details (Zelle/Venmo). You’ll have feedback within 24 hours.
The AP Lang exam is Wednesday. There’s still time…but not much.